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Ophelia's Pandorum by ~illwillkill:iconillwillkill:



Morphine for the pain. Anesthetic to forget. For within me lies the blame. The convergence of the net. The one to lay the trap. Concoctions by one's mind. Has left none to adapt. The end of my kind. A deal has been done. Agreement drawn in blood. For some will never see the rising sun. Thanks to creatures called from mud. Condemn me to be damned. For I had laid the curse. Should I be shammed? Well lets roll out the hearse. Lay my corpse to rest. Let me enter Hell's gates. To carry out unrest. Is what Lucifer awaits.
©2009 ~illwillkill
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something new, something old
something for your eyes untold
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hope you all like

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:iconserynzia:
This is amazing. I really like it. It's evocative, full of lushly dark imagery but still strongly tied to reality...I enjoyed it. :heart:

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:iconillwillkill:
thank you ever so much *bear hugs the breath out of you*
it means a lot to me to return to DA and still get critique :)

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~Rraven~
The worse critics are ourselves
:iconbelladonna170:
This is very good. A bittle morbid and dark, but dark is good.
I have been working on trying to make poems, and so far I have only made one...You would not understand it...

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-I don't fear Death...Death fears me...
-The best of us find happiness in misery.
-Make the best of what you have, even if all you have is nothing...
-I write for the same reason I breathe: if I didn't, I would die.
:iconillwillkill:
ohh your still watching :wow:
heh heh well...i've kinda been wanting to express my "dark side" COOKIES umm.. *cough*

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~Rraven~
The worse critics are ourselves
:iconillwillkill:
---continued from before... clicked send button by mistake---
but still managing to fail my imagination with words...

oh? you have? ohhh... i shall have to see.. linky please?? pretty please?

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~Rraven~
The worse critics are ourselves
:iconpokemon-breeder:
Nice It has great evil imagery
and give me a great story to think about

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I'm not detached from reality...
I just don't like reality very much...
:iconpon-pon:
I like it, the rhythm is good.

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Sticks and stones can break my bones
But words can break my heart
:iconbelladonna170:
lol, of course I am!

...Cookies?...

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-I don't fear Death...Death fears me...
-The best of us find happiness in misery.
-Make the best of what you have, even if all you have is nothing...
-I write for the same reason I breathe: if I didn't, I would die.
:iconbelladonna170:
I, too, have the same problem, you are not alone. But some can do it so quickly and it is so beautiful and makes to much sense...*trailing off in thoughts*
Hmmm...maybe my poem should be considered a riddle instead.

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-I don't fear Death...Death fears me...
-The best of us find happiness in misery.
-Make the best of what you have, even if all you have is nothing...
-I write for the same reason I breathe: if I didn't, I would die.
:iconpianoxlullaby:
Ah, I haven't read anything from you in such a long time. I've always liked your way with words. It's very unique to me.

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What is a friend? One soul in two bodies.

Hopeless Romantic right down to my soul...

God never gives us more than we can handle.

"I won't sleep well tonight." ~Cloud Strife - Dissidia

:heart: :blowkiss: Lullerz

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