Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

 


Hold me and never let go
Take me on and don't be slow
Through parted lips
You reveal what you are
Your eyes show that you starve
Your mouth on my neck
It's not a kiss
Love doesn't exist
But I don't care
I like what we share
Deeper and deeper we sink
Into this forbidden act
Too late, can't turn back
What you need
Is to feed
Willingly I surrender
What is blood red
Departing is forever
Finally the spell is said
Transformation complete
This is what I really seek
The youth of immortality
Is now a reality
Now we are forever
Consumed by darkness together
The screech of my voice
Shows me my choice
Of what I've become
Not just someone
The night for my taking
No longer waiting
Never again to dwell
This is my farewell
Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
:iconillwillkill:

Author's Comments

the transformation of a human into a vampire
if only it would happen to me lol XD

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconmajjellan:
thats really good! ^_^

--
"I liked it that way, as I am nocturnal myself,
with pale skin and large light-seeking eyes."

Avatar by TotallyStumped
:iconillwillkill:
thanks, much appreciated ^^

--
~Rraven~
The worse critics are ourselves
:iconspace4bid:
I love it.
Maybe not as a vampire but i see it as joy for a static mind.

--
be unplanned _be alive
:iconillwillkill:
true
well it was written for the transformation as a vamp
but i thick it can be interpreted differently
maybe even as a breaking down of the mind

--
~Rraven~
The worse critics are ourselves
:iconillwillkill:
i appreciate the fave ^^

--
~Rraven~
The worse critics are ourselves

Details

July 25, 2007
1.0 KB

Statistics

5
3 [who?]
51 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map